Wednesday, June 28, 2006
A arbitrary father
He's very arbitrary, he always complains everything, everything and everything in our house. My dad shouts at mom now and then, my mother has to do everything in order to please him but he doesn't see enough. He wants the best everything and he shoudn't be a member of the communist party.He behaves as Hitler. Yesterday, i can't stand him, i fought it out his unreason. He beat me by a stick but i didn't counter-attack him...when i was a child, i admired him very much. During in the couple of years, i have felt hate him a lot. I want to seek another house after having a job, so that i can avoid him.
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At first i think that your E has been improved after a long time learning and trying. Bravo! But there are some mistakes here. Remember when writting,never use reduction structure ( Ex: isn't=is not). And the sentence "...doesn't see enough" is not right. It is Vietnamese English. The right one is "...did not think it was enough". continue writting and learning. Good luck!
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